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Without you,
I would become sustenance to the void,
Without you,
My being would melt
Feeding the universe my dripping heart,

Haunted by your image,
My eyes become a hallow stone,
Tormented by the echoes of your steps
My thoughts would dance the dreidels dance

Without you,
The sky becomes a gapping wound
Without you,
The freezing night puts blisters on my soul.

Both poisoned and addicted to your scent
I'd have forgotten how to breathe,
My skin would crack in grains of sand
And wind would scatter tiny dunes of me…

So I’ll be gone…
©2007-2009 ~KamiKai
:iconkamikai:

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:iconcoryallenger:
aww cheer up there ^^ everything'll be alright in the end :D

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Step into the light, or soon, you'll have stepped out of yourself.
:iconkamikai:
I am feeling great. I wrote this poem in Romanian some time ago... for the soul mate we all have. Translating it into english meant almost righting a completely new poem =D

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I am here now...see me... before I disintegrate into chaos
:iconkamikai:
darn i did it again >.>

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I am here now...see me... before I disintegrate into chaos
:iconcoryallenger:
ah ^^; ok that makes more sense :D But... WoW I've never written a poem in a different language before. It's really good one :)

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Step into the light, or soon, you'll have stepped out of yourself.
:iconlinkinsim:
This is deep.. I really like it :)
Sorry it's taken so long to reply, been hectic at work *hugs*

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Playstation 3 South Africa
:iconkamikai:
Thank you!:hug:
only tried in french, romanian and english...gave up on franch after the first try :giggle:
Though come to think of it I had that bublished in the highschool magazine :confused:
Oh does shouting "te quiero" in the shower count as poem :giggle:

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I am here now...see me... before I disintegrate into chaos
:iconkamikai:
Glad you like it ^^;
*pokes boss* leave her alone:shakefist:

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I am here now...see me... before I disintegrate into chaos
:iconcuffy:
I must say that is something Gr8 thanks for sharing.

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I call It As I See It

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